Writing is so tough for some people. But, I’m going to rant for a minute. It cracks me up what I have to deal with sometimes.
Just Get Started Already
A guy is pacing his floor, throwing his football up and down, looking out the window, banging his head against the wall…
“The night was dark and salty…”
Salty, I don’t think that word works all that well. Not salty. The air can be salty I guess, but the night wasn’t salty.
“The night was dark and lonely…”
Well, I guess the character could have been lonely. But, night doesn’t get lonely.
Our guy paces the floor a bit more with his football. He puts it down and pours himself a short glass of his flavor. He takes a drink and paces the floor a bit more as he grapples over what word is going to follow, “The night was dark and…”
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